The Re-Write
“O...kay.” Tinkletoes stirs at the sound of Carp’s voice. “Done?” He asks. “Yes. This is terrible by the way.” Carp says as he reaches out and grabs a stack of pages from the printer. He hands them to Tinkletoes/John who begins reading. “An explosion right away. Nice work.” “Keep going.” Tinkletoes/John keeps reading. “Good. Good. Have you thought about using a flamethrower on page six? It would be more visually interesting than your everyday tank fire.” “This isn’t a movie.” Carp counters. “But John Wick is. This might be in a movie some day. Burning fires all over the landscape makes it more interesting. Besides don’t the people who read this shit picture it in their heads, you know, when they’re reading?” Carp nods grudgingly. “Then let’s use flamethrowers.” Carp waits for Tinkletoes/John to get to page seven. “How will the building Francesca has taken shelter in collapse then genius?” “It catches fire.” “It the building collapses while on f